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That is so aching and beautiful, Jennifer! The part "but when the milk runs low, and melting snow flows down the river" struck me especially--what an amazing contrast!

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Feb 20, 2023·edited Feb 20, 2023Liked by Jennifer Woodworth

I love the sense of desperation and almost-loss in this poem. "Balanced rocks" is a wonderful image—an object of strength and permanence but teetering and uncertain.

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Many thanks to all who read me here!

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